Nineteen years ago this summer
by Andy P.
BillRueben’s Inside, Ann Rueben glanced |
RuebenAndy had his I was just thankful no need to say |
AnnBill and Dad working in silence every polite word |
AndyDad had hair Dad’s hands reaching out, |
Andy P. is a recent graduate of St. Olaf College in Northfield, Minnesota with a degree in vocal music education. He currently works as a Tour Actor/Director with Missoula Children’s Theatre. Andy spends his free time writing music and poetry.
I love this thread of poems, each viewpoint, it keeps unfolding in layers as they work. Skillful in it’s simplicity. ‘the brief language/of nuts and bolts,’ and ‘thwarted by/smudged glass.’ Simply lovely through out. Reminds me of a small town, middle America, and it could be years ago or now.
Thank you for your quiet, mature, polyphonic, multigenerational, poignant translation of experience, Andy.
What a great concept, beautifully, lightly but poignantly and subtly carried out. This just made me smile and smile, thoughtfully. Terrific stuff!
Oh my, what a rich theme this is proving to be.
This is really an amazing piece… seemingly simple and yet so rich. I begs to be read and reread several times and in differing order. Really well done.
Yep, James… the nature of complexity, and richness of life, generated from even just a few of the most basic patterns (chaos theory). Here’s a musical example that came to mind, from Robert Scott’s early rhythm generator experiments, 6 elements layered together (1950) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LACSzUr6EVw&feature=related
which later yielded this http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l5vvKS8611g (1958)
This is wonderful work, so clear and resonant – and beautifully poised. I’ve read it over and over. Thank you.