Relics
The titanium screw will still be in my jaw
when I am six months under in my box.
The plastic lens will fall to the back of my skull.
When all my flesh is in some maggot’s maw,
my knucklebones lie scattered like thrown jacks,
the titanium screw will still be in my jaw.
No wrinkles to deface my bony brow,
my sweet brown eyes reduced to shadowed sockets,
the plastic lens will fall to the back of my skull,
my vertebrae laid flat, all in a row
from C1 by the numbers down to coccyx,
the titanium screw will still be in my jaw.
Reduced to bones from head to hammertoe,
my turned up nose a sink-hole, no more lips,
the plastic lens will fall to the back of my skull.
When I have no tongue to squall and yowl,
no tears, no laugh, no song but hollow clack,
the titanium screw will still be in my jaw,
the plastic lens will fall to the back of my skull.
Sherry Chandler is the author of Dance the Black-Eyed Girl (Finishing Line) and My Will and Testament is On the Desk (FootHills Publishing). She has received support from the Kentucky Arts Council and the Kentucky Foundation for Women. Links to her works can be found on her website.
This is stunning. I love the way the syllables trip and stumble like scattering knucklebones and titanium screws. Bravo.
I wish I had written that . . .
Wonderful.
grand poem.
Bravo! Well done Sherry.
The repetition of the form definitely suits the subject matter — and it’s not an ordinary day when one encounters “coccyx” and “sockets” in rhyme! Well done!
I love villanelles. So much meat on the bones. Thank you!
Wow. This was so wonderful to read aloud. Well done. (And a fellow FootHillsian, too!)
Terrific poem on all counts!
Thank you all. You make me blush.
An ironic hymn sung to modern medicine. Plus some apprehension about What Waits.
great work sherry what a terrific use of form!