No Diminishing Returns
June 17, 2009
We talk fifty miles over wire, a mile
for each year since our eyes touched.
Legends still vibrate in your voice, fables,
story of a stray star, Atlantis provoked,
burst meadow beyond the hill, bedding down,
a tree counting the darkness, flower in a field
of rye. I remember a winter clean as salt,
memorialized snow banks, foreign country
of a couch thickly green and awkward
as landed amphibian, a blue wool skirt
of accordion pleats I blew smoke into,
my ear on its blue sky listening to stars
inside, eyes closed, mouth opened,
stretching, reaching, turning corners.
by Tom Sheehan
Categories: Economy
Tom Sheehan
Good grief! I’ve gotta get a hankie and daub my brow.
Yes, those *lost* moments aren’t lost at all. Lossless economy.
*I remember a winter clean as salt,* oh, what I wouldn’t give to write a phrase as pure and potent as that…this is such a fiercely fine memory poem.
I see my good friend Holly A. and I feel the same about this poem, line by line, truly/literally achingly beautiful.
This is simply lovely.
Such intense recall, magical.
Always such a distinctive, wonderful voice.
Once again, I say, “My God, Tom. How do you do this?” Your depth is forever. You leave us aching, wanting, yet satisfied. You Are a Great American Writer. Thank you Tom.