The Fire Department Tells Us to Plan for Evacuation
As the wall of fire comes my way, I’ll grab a long look
at plants I grew from starters, twigs I propagated into blooms.
I’ll listen for the music of the living room when the ceiling drummed
and we danced to Van Morrison in our empty space.
I will take the wrinkles and rumples of life happening,
the worn parts of the sheets and the towels.
I will take the smells of the sea blowing through,
while our showers ran down the drain, and our hair shampooed.
I will take the building’s noises, pipes full of water and creaking steps,
and glowing red dots on electronic devices.
On my way out, I will take you arriving at the door for me,
take you ringing the doorbell with flowers for me.
On the way out, I will take my willingness to leave all this behind.
I will run naked into my next life.
by Janet A. Baker
Oh. What a magnificent poem. I’m staggered.
Simply awesome.
I like this poem. It’s words are rhymthic like music. It’s images are subtle in range from soft (flowers) to harsh (fire department). I’ll re-read this one. Thanks.
Magnificent. A very imaginative approach to “what to take with you” — sheer poetry that marries the magic of a superb underlying idea with precise, wonderful language.
Dear Janet,
We love to see this poem published and we join you, running naked into our next life.
Love and look forward to seeing you at the Poetry Community Meeting in 2009!
Happy New Year,
Rebecca and John
Beautiful.
I find this witty, and gorgeous. The title did a great job catching my attention, and then I wasn’t disappointed at all.