winter escapes
by Daniela Elza
the snow was unwelcome.
still it blooms lilies on the dust
pad of busy feet
on signs with missing letters.
before the day is over
we plough it aside.
~
I flip my life over
like a carpet on the snow
stomp to paisley crescendos
of Brownian emotions
in this city abscessed
with growth and cranes.
~
what do we call the lily-of-the-valley
after the valley is gone?
back home we know it as Virgin’s Tear
now acidly sheds on the surplice
of cities where clergy will gather
in peach coloured rooms
to ruminate over convenient beliefs.
~
another obstacle to overcome
today melted with the snow
before I could touch it—
this fractal fire that lingers
on the fringe of a snowflake
before it fails to be white.
Daniela Elza (blog) has released more than a 150 poems into the wor(l)d in over 50 publications. This year she completed her doctorate in Philosophy of Education at Simon Fraser University and launched The Book of It. Daniela’s book The Weight of Dew is forthcoming with Mother Tongue Publishing (April, 2012). She lives with her family in Vancouver, Canada.
wow, Daniela! such attentive observatons, subtly but powerfully rendered. stunning!
Delicious…
I thought the white space, the broken lines really worked beautifully here in the context of snow.
Thank you Steve, Fiona and Barbara,
Your feedback and thoughts are much appreciated. We are so much more enriched with each others eyes and ears.