Comments on: When Dreams Swim With Cities of Men http://qarrtsiluni.com/2009/03/25/when-dreams-swim/ online literary magazine Sun, 27 May 2012 00:49:27 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ By: ybonesy http://qarrtsiluni.com/2009/03/25/when-dreams-swim/#comment-20322 Wed, 08 Apr 2009 14:26:21 +0000 http://qarrtsiluni.com/?p=2797#comment-20322 The use of the imagery as part of the creative process is brilliant. I can see how that would have a cohesive effect to what otherwise might be two completely divergent directions.

These words stood out:

Scents of pine and laurel rise
from humus beds, sending soft, beguiling
messages of comfort —
an urge to burrow competes
with a cirrus-streaked bowl of sky.

Maybe it’s the time of year, the transition between winter and summer. There is an earthy quality to this time.

]]> By: Jenny Chu http://qarrtsiluni.com/2009/03/25/when-dreams-swim/#comment-19868 Fri, 27 Mar 2009 20:37:18 +0000 http://qarrtsiluni.com/?p=2797#comment-19868 I like. Very much.

]]> By: Michelle http://qarrtsiluni.com/2009/03/25/when-dreams-swim/#comment-19753 Thu, 26 Mar 2009 15:26:41 +0000 http://qarrtsiluni.com/?p=2797#comment-19753 This is absolutely amazing, Deb and Christine.

]]> By: Laura http://qarrtsiluni.com/2009/03/25/when-dreams-swim/#comment-19747 Thu, 26 Mar 2009 13:33:24 +0000 http://qarrtsiluni.com/?p=2797#comment-19747 Just exquisite, all of it. One of the very strongest collaborations so far. But…”poeming?” Ummm, please. No.

]]> By: Beryl Singleton Bissell http://qarrtsiluni.com/2009/03/25/when-dreams-swim/#comment-19700 Thu, 26 Mar 2009 00:33:22 +0000 http://qarrtsiluni.com/?p=2797#comment-19700 Such wonderful images. I felt the hair lift on my head, wanting to follow your words into the hissing clouds and rushing temples.

]]> By: johemmant http://qarrtsiluni.com/2009/03/25/when-dreams-swim/#comment-19682 Wed, 25 Mar 2009 20:38:53 +0000 http://qarrtsiluni.com/?p=2797#comment-19682 You guys write so well together, this is a fab collab. And the last six lines……whew.

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