Comments on: Why No One Saw It Coming http://qarrtsiluni.com/2009/02/28/why-no-one-saw-it-coming/ online literary magazine Thu, 09 Feb 2012 03:09:39 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ By: Susan Elbe http://qarrtsiluni.com/2009/02/28/why-no-one-saw-it-coming/#comment-19084 Mon, 09 Mar 2009 23:10:44 +0000 http://qarrtsiluni.com/?p=3308#comment-19084 Thanks, Mike, and everyone else for your comments. It’s nice to know someone is reading!

]]> By: Mike Kriesel http://qarrtsiluni.com/2009/02/28/why-no-one-saw-it-coming/#comment-19078 Mon, 09 Mar 2009 18:17:19 +0000 http://qarrtsiluni.com/?p=3308#comment-19078 Lots of really good lines, floating in a fractured style that works. The poems works well. And good advice, to collaberate with someone whose style is at least a little distant / different from yours.

]]> By: Mary http://qarrtsiluni.com/2009/02/28/why-no-one-saw-it-coming/#comment-18811 Sun, 01 Mar 2009 21:58:40 +0000 http://qarrtsiluni.com/?p=3308#comment-18811 Outstanding–intelligent and lyrical. The language and shape worked
well with the disquieting elements of the story. Smooth and seamless work.
The poem will stay with me for a very long time. Thanks.

You two have a good thing going.

Mary

]]> By: Dethe Elza http://qarrtsiluni.com/2009/02/28/why-no-one-saw-it-coming/#comment-18804 Sun, 01 Mar 2009 18:58:27 +0000 http://qarrtsiluni.com/?p=3308#comment-18804 I can relate to the process notes, we also have the trouble with sticking with it, with finding time to continue. I love this poem and look forward to more.

]]> By: Laura http://qarrtsiluni.com/2009/02/28/why-no-one-saw-it-coming/#comment-18801 Sun, 01 Mar 2009 11:44:31 +0000 http://qarrtsiluni.com/?p=3308#comment-18801 Gorgeous poem! And beautifully, intelligently read, too. This is one of my all time Qarrtsiluni favorites!
More collaboration from Susan and Ron, please!
All the best,
Laura F.

]]> By: Susan Elbe http://qarrtsiluni.com/2009/02/28/why-no-one-saw-it-coming/#comment-18792 Sun, 01 Mar 2009 03:15:06 +0000 http://qarrtsiluni.com/?p=3308#comment-18792 Thanks, Daniela! It was surprising for us too and a lot of fun to write.

]]> By: daniela elza http://qarrtsiluni.com/2009/02/28/why-no-one-saw-it-coming/#comment-18785 Sat, 28 Feb 2009 20:26:37 +0000 http://qarrtsiluni.com/?p=3308#comment-18785 i like the surprises in this poem, the thought that moves through it, and the things that are hard to talk about. thanks.

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