Comments on: Expansion at a Time of Great Leavings http://qarrtsiluni.com/2008/12/23/expansion-at-a-time/ online literary magazine Thu, 09 Feb 2012 03:09:39 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ By: Jenny Chu http://qarrtsiluni.com/2008/12/23/expansion-at-a-time/#comment-17244 Wed, 14 Jan 2009 00:08:02 +0000 http://qarrtsiluni.wordpress.com/?p=2320#comment-17244 Heavy looming lines. Mysterious; Ashy and dark…you poets always do write wonderful stories. The craft of short fiction blossoms from your wonderful skill at the line level.

]]> By: Meredith http://qarrtsiluni.com/2008/12/23/expansion-at-a-time/#comment-17050 Tue, 06 Jan 2009 22:08:37 +0000 http://qarrtsiluni.wordpress.com/?p=2320#comment-17050 Deb,

You’ve outdone yourself again! What an astonishing piece. I am rather at a loss for words….

M

]]> By: Pamela http://qarrtsiluni.com/2008/12/23/expansion-at-a-time/#comment-16920 Tue, 30 Dec 2008 08:01:11 +0000 http://qarrtsiluni.wordpress.com/?p=2320#comment-16920 This is an astonishing, tight piece of writing. Rich in imagery and detail, it is never laden … just beautifully polished. I loved each line. Excellent story.

]]> By: christopher http://qarrtsiluni.com/2008/12/23/expansion-at-a-time/#comment-16763 Wed, 24 Dec 2008 22:17:47 +0000 http://qarrtsiluni.wordpress.com/?p=2320#comment-16763 How It Ends

The world ends sideways.
You and I will still argue,
That’s what we must do
Or else disappear.
Small and petty thoughts of you
Curl my brain waves up,
Drive out the gray thoughts
Of the dissolving last days,
Of “Where will we go?”

]]> By: dana http://qarrtsiluni.com/2008/12/23/expansion-at-a-time/#comment-16743 Tue, 23 Dec 2008 22:08:05 +0000 http://qarrtsiluni.wordpress.com/?p=2320#comment-16743 Oh, neat. I lost my tweezers.

Oh well. At least it’s not the end of the world. ;)

]]> By: dana http://qarrtsiluni.com/2008/12/23/expansion-at-a-time/#comment-16741 Tue, 23 Dec 2008 22:03:44 +0000 http://qarrtsiluni.wordpress.com/?p=2320#comment-16741 So what I love about your fiction is the density of the language, the precision of the images. Your writing is so poetic, so loaded, everything so packed in. You write beyond genre, you know. Or you intermingle genres. Which makes what you produce lush and evocative.

Also, for some reason I really want to pluck my eyebrows now. Hey, I am snowed in! No time like the present.

]]> By: johemmant http://qarrtsiluni.com/2008/12/23/expansion-at-a-time/#comment-16732 Tue, 23 Dec 2008 18:49:11 +0000 http://qarrtsiluni.wordpress.com/?p=2320#comment-16732 This is really well done, Deb. The writing is rivetting and the details perfect.

]]> By: christine http://qarrtsiluni.com/2008/12/23/expansion-at-a-time/#comment-16715 Tue, 23 Dec 2008 16:17:36 +0000 http://qarrtsiluni.wordpress.com/?p=2320#comment-16715 Amazing story, very well done. The microscopic vision of the most mundane details matters in this world of stretched out time.

]]> By: dale http://qarrtsiluni.com/2008/12/23/expansion-at-a-time/#comment-16714 Tue, 23 Dec 2008 15:36:57 +0000 http://qarrtsiluni.wordpress.com/?p=2320#comment-16714 Oh. That’s beautifully done, Deb. That’s the apocalypse I see coming.

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