http://qarrtsiluni.com/2008/12/11/the-four-horsemen/ online literary magazine Sun, 27 May 2012 00:49:27 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ http://qarrtsiluni.com/2008/12/11/the-four-horsemen/#comment-16378 Sun, 14 Dec 2008 12:20:33 +0000 http://qarrtsiluni.wordpress.com/?p=2396#comment-16378 I like the progression from stanza to stanza building the tension and becoming increasingly more familar to modern experience. The sense of a world ripe for apocalypse comes over very effectively. Great intensity too. I like “rocks turned wise with weather” and the bedroom and harbour images sit nicely together.

]]> http://qarrtsiluni.com/2008/12/11/the-four-horsemen/#comment-16290 Fri, 12 Dec 2008 11:06:46 +0000 http://qarrtsiluni.wordpress.com/?p=2396#comment-16290 Some good images (the ferreting claw of storms.), but I wasn’t sure about bemused by calm

]]> http://qarrtsiluni.com/2008/12/11/the-four-horsemen/#comment-16246 Thu, 11 Dec 2008 16:08:19 +0000 http://qarrtsiluni.wordpress.com/?p=2396#comment-16246 Apocalyptic, rich description, and a rich voice to match. “Breeding money” is quite timely, making me smile, a spot of humour within a nightmare.

]]>