Comments on: Melons

By: iain

iain — Fri, 27 Feb 2009 16:22:02 +0000

This has really given me an appetite for melons.. but what to do? (ke garni – nepali) Big melons? or small melons? some prefer a large portion of melon while others prefer nice little pert melons. I like small ones. so i`ll probably have some small ones. I used to be a melon salesman… we sold two types of melons… thin ones,. and fat ones? but the slender ones were of a kind of distorted veluptous nature.. deceptively curvey. Which in its self has a kind of nice ovaltine ring to it, if you know what i mean. but above all else, at the end of the day, when alls said and done, and the fat lady has begun to bark her sombre tune, remember… you are not the only one for whom the excrement has collided with the revolving oscilator.. good night

By: Jessica

Jessica — Tue, 26 Aug 2008 02:34:37 +0000

Lovely poem!

By: johemmant

johemmant — Mon, 25 Aug 2008 20:26:45 +0000

Wild. Mindbending. Love the last line.

By: C. Albert

C. Albert — Mon, 25 Aug 2008 17:17:23 +0000

Love this! Strangest synchronicity: I was making a collage today of maps and melons and young school girls, so this all makes perfect sense.

By: Chezzy

Chezzy — Mon, 25 Aug 2008 15:23:48 +0000

Knock, knock.
Who’s there?
Cantaloupe.
Cantaloupe who?
Cantaloupe tonight…Pop’s got the ladder!