Comments on: Moth and Rat http://qarrtsiluni.com/2008/01/05/moth-and-rat/ online literary magazine Thu, 09 Feb 2012 03:09:39 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ By: Scott Ruescher http://qarrtsiluni.com/2008/01/05/moth-and-rat/#comment-17263 Thu, 15 Jan 2009 04:16:13 +0000 http://qarrtsiluni.com/2008/01/05/moth-and-rat/#comment-17263 Good stuff, Monica. Sinewy and sinuous. Marianne Moore would be happy -and so would Ratso Rizzo. – Scott R.

]]> By: dale http://qarrtsiluni.com/2008/01/05/moth-and-rat/#comment-2272 Wed, 09 Jan 2008 00:51:26 +0000 http://qarrtsiluni.com/2008/01/05/moth-and-rat/#comment-2272 Bonta told me I had to read this, and he was right. Terrific poem. Thank you. I love how slyly the rhymes work around.

]]> By: limin http://qarrtsiluni.com/2008/01/05/moth-and-rat/#comment-2245 Tue, 08 Jan 2008 02:32:18 +0000 http://qarrtsiluni.com/2008/01/05/moth-and-rat/#comment-2245 there’s this counterpoint in moth and rat, one with wings and the other with sharp teeth, and how they get into our lives. i love the musical quality and the imageries are haunting and beautiful.

]]> By: mansuetude http://qarrtsiluni.com/2008/01/05/moth-and-rat/#comment-2221 Sat, 05 Jan 2008 16:00:08 +0000 http://qarrtsiluni.com/2008/01/05/moth-and-rat/#comment-2221 and my skin
pitted with beings
trying to get out or in,

this really is nice writing.! I think the milkweed image too made me sort of sit up and take notice.

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