Comments on: And the Crickets Outside the Window http://qarrtsiluni.com/2007/12/06/and-the-crickets-outside-the-window/ online literary magazine Thu, 09 Feb 2012 03:09:39 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ By: vicki http://qarrtsiluni.com/2007/12/06/and-the-crickets-outside-the-window/#comment-1999 Thu, 20 Dec 2007 19:44:56 +0000 http://qarrtsiluni.com/2007/12/06/and-the-crickets-outside-the-window/#comment-1999 Lovely!

]]> By: Katherine Durham Oldmixon http://qarrtsiluni.com/2007/12/06/and-the-crickets-outside-the-window/#comment-1977 Wed, 19 Dec 2007 03:02:31 +0000 http://qarrtsiluni.com/2007/12/06/and-the-crickets-outside-the-window/#comment-1977 I keep coming back to this poem (why do I think I should have put an end break after “coming”?) so let me pause to compliment. It’s tight–bravo!

]]> By: puahinseattle http://qarrtsiluni.com/2007/12/06/and-the-crickets-outside-the-window/#comment-1883 Mon, 10 Dec 2007 17:59:45 +0000 http://qarrtsiluni.com/2007/12/06/and-the-crickets-outside-the-window/#comment-1883 I love this eroticism’s ability to draw us and the insects into one vibrating text! Go Dana!!

]]> By: becoy http://qarrtsiluni.com/2007/12/06/and-the-crickets-outside-the-window/#comment-1881 Mon, 10 Dec 2007 16:15:49 +0000 http://qarrtsiluni.com/2007/12/06/and-the-crickets-outside-the-window/#comment-1881 Dana, you rock my world this Monday morning. Thanks for this.

]]> By: pepekltheassassin http://qarrtsiluni.com/2007/12/06/and-the-crickets-outside-the-window/#comment-1864 Sun, 09 Dec 2007 02:35:28 +0000 http://qarrtsiluni.com/2007/12/06/and-the-crickets-outside-the-window/#comment-1864 I finally got my sound working and was happy to hear your voice doing this super poem! Congratulations, again!

]]> By: Dennis http://qarrtsiluni.com/2007/12/06/and-the-crickets-outside-the-window/#comment-1858 Sat, 08 Dec 2007 20:57:05 +0000 http://qarrtsiluni.com/2007/12/06/and-the-crickets-outside-the-window/#comment-1858 I listened to that 3x. That’s an interesting piece. The indifference in your voice really drives home the point and highlights the message in the 5th paragraph. Very clever.

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]]> By: qarrtsiluni http://qarrtsiluni.com/2007/12/06/and-the-crickets-outside-the-window/#comment-1841 Fri, 07 Dec 2007 14:37:48 +0000 http://qarrtsiluni.com/2007/12/06/and-the-crickets-outside-the-window/#comment-1841 No, it isn’t. It’s a Flash player, so make sure you have the latest version of Flash software. But if you click on the MP3 link, you should be able to play that on whatever your computer’s default audio player might be. If you can’t do this, you need to contact tech support.

]]> By: Rethabile http://qarrtsiluni.com/2007/12/06/and-the-crickets-outside-the-window/#comment-1839 Fri, 07 Dec 2007 13:11:08 +0000 http://qarrtsiluni.com/2007/12/06/and-the-crickets-outside-the-window/#comment-1839 Can’t play the sound file. Is that normal?

]]> By: Rethabile http://qarrtsiluni.com/2007/12/06/and-the-crickets-outside-the-window/#comment-1836 Fri, 07 Dec 2007 11:05:43 +0000 http://qarrtsiluni.com/2007/12/06/and-the-crickets-outside-the-window/#comment-1836 Great. Great. Great! I enjoyed this a lot and will have to read it again.

]]> By: blackeyedsusan http://qarrtsiluni.com/2007/12/06/and-the-crickets-outside-the-window/#comment-1829 Thu, 06 Dec 2007 18:52:49 +0000 http://qarrtsiluni.com/2007/12/06/and-the-crickets-outside-the-window/#comment-1829 Hi Dana,

Now this the erotic done well. sensual, tactile, real. Enjoyed this.

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