Comments on: Red Umbrella http://qarrtsiluni.com/2007/06/13/red-umbrella/ online literary magazine Thu, 09 Feb 2012 03:09:39 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ By: Sonia http://qarrtsiluni.com/2007/06/13/red-umbrella/#comment-1202 Mon, 18 Jun 2007 14:12:11 +0000 http://qarrtsiluni.wordpress.com/2007/06/13/red-umbrella/#comment-1202 Beautiful! Congratulations!

]]> By: leslee http://qarrtsiluni.com/2007/06/13/red-umbrella/#comment-1201 Sun, 17 Jun 2007 21:56:23 +0000 http://qarrtsiluni.wordpress.com/2007/06/13/red-umbrella/#comment-1201 Thanks, Pica, Jean and Dick! Ai, I remember this viscerally and the ripples still go forward. Sigh. I hope after I move I’ll have more time to write again (2 hours *not* commuting!).

]]> By: Dick Jones http://qarrtsiluni.com/2007/06/13/red-umbrella/#comment-1200 Sat, 16 Jun 2007 18:04:36 +0000 http://qarrtsiluni.wordpress.com/2007/06/13/red-umbrella/#comment-1200 Excellent – powerful & evocative.

]]> By: Jean http://qarrtsiluni.com/2007/06/13/red-umbrella/#comment-1199 Fri, 15 Jun 2007 09:25:19 +0000 http://qarrtsiluni.wordpress.com/2007/06/13/red-umbrella/#comment-1199 I do remember this well, and how much I liked it first time around, and am happy to read it again. So simple-seeming, but I can read it over and over, being drawn to something different each time. And each time, of course, the image of angry, kicking legs disrupts uncomfortably, whilst still playfully evoking kids playing on the beach.

]]> By: Pica http://qarrtsiluni.com/2007/06/13/red-umbrella/#comment-1198 Thu, 14 Jun 2007 11:47:08 +0000 http://qarrtsiluni.wordpress.com/2007/06/13/red-umbrella/#comment-1198 Leslee — I somehow missed this first time round.

I love it — so many red echoes.

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