Comments on: Rosehips http://qarrtsiluni.com/2006/03/30/rosehips/ online literary magazine Thu, 09 Feb 2012 03:09:39 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ By: maria http://qarrtsiluni.com/2006/03/30/rosehips/#comment-522 Mon, 03 Apr 2006 13:14:31 +0000 http://qarrtsiluni.wordpress.com/2006/03/30/rosehips/#comment-522 Thank you all for these appreciative comments. I have been so swamped with life (and mostly off-line, too) that I haven’t had a chance to check back here until now.

]]> By: Dave http://qarrtsiluni.com/2006/03/30/rosehips/#comment-521 Sun, 02 Apr 2006 16:45:55 +0000 http://qarrtsiluni.wordpress.com/2006/03/30/rosehips/#comment-521 That mysterious opening line keeps making me reread it, round and round, from open door to valley, everything about to turn – taut. I like this poem even better than your last one.

]]> By: patry http://qarrtsiluni.com/2006/03/30/rosehips/#comment-520 Sat, 01 Apr 2006 23:12:31 +0000 http://qarrtsiluni.wordpress.com/2006/03/30/rosehips/#comment-520 The door left ajar–neither fully opened, nor closed
as the source of great pain–is so startling and vivid.
I am always amazed and impressed by poets who use brevity
like a knife as you do here.

]]> By: leslee http://qarrtsiluni.com/2006/03/30/rosehips/#comment-519 Fri, 31 Mar 2006 20:18:29 +0000 http://qarrtsiluni.wordpress.com/2006/03/30/rosehips/#comment-519 Wonderful. Perfect word choices, and none too many. Crystalline.

]]> By: beth http://qarrtsiluni.com/2006/03/30/rosehips/#comment-518 Fri, 31 Mar 2006 15:00:54 +0000 http://qarrtsiluni.wordpress.com/2006/03/30/rosehips/#comment-518 Beautiful, terse, condensed, and intense. Congratulations, Maria.

]]> By: Soen Joon http://qarrtsiluni.com/2006/03/30/rosehips/#comment-517 Thu, 30 Mar 2006 23:12:21 +0000 http://qarrtsiluni.wordpress.com/2006/03/30/rosehips/#comment-517 Wow; the feeling of “hard-heartedness” as central to memory, and longing; how we tend to crystallize a place, a person, into a fixed image…

Wonderful.

]]> By: Mary Alexandra Agner http://qarrtsiluni.com/2006/03/30/rosehips/#comment-516 Thu, 30 Mar 2006 16:00:14 +0000 http://qarrtsiluni.wordpress.com/2006/03/30/rosehips/#comment-516 This is wonderful. I love all the dual body-flower words you use.

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